A crescent, green and holy
Dark irons emerge from its nerve
Pierce through a virgin heart
Red. Gushing and frothing arise
And flow in the slope
White rats scurry in haste
Black ants , hither and thither
Run, but to no avail
Darkness spares no-one there
Death by drowning is cruel.
Snubbing off life for reasons
Beyond comprehension is , a sin
No i don’t blame u mortal
I blame HE who does so
Ensnare you ,blind your logic
Curse HIM. No kill HIM
Wait. HE cant be killed
Then put HIM in our hell
Yes , do it right now
Take HIM to trial !!!
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okay...except for the controversy over the implication of 'irons', it's a powerful poem, with powerful and effective words. But you don't want to publish it in a place where it can reach out to other people. So what's the use?
Number two: why punish HIM? If the terrorists are 'mortals', why ain't the mastermind behind them so? He wasn't born a demi-god, he wasn't born evil. He's mortal as well. The day he saw the light of the world, he was an innocent baby as well. Something changed him. Find the 'something'. Find the cause that made HIM what he is today. Kill the CAUSE. Violence begets violence. So punishing the criminal is not the solution.
purging the world isnt a realistic goal.
killing the root .. so that no more irons are produced ... is.
thank u for the effort
the 'root' won't get killed. Watch 'The Kingdom'. Kill a man. His children will kill you. your children will kill them. their grand-children will kill again. and so on.
You're actually in support of capital punishment, it seems!
i support punishment....
international judicial systems , added to human rights activists , culminate in a worse fate than death
High thoughts...high thoughts...higher words!
high ... higher....highest
Being blinded to the extent of killing people,and losing one's humanity ,I believe is a sin,a grievous one too..! So the blame is on the blinded and the one who blinds too..!
The narrative builds up an appropriately sinister picture.With a "refrain" in place,I can see it in a heavy metal album too. ;-)
I know this is like blatantly obvious..but well that is what I put my money on. :D
So I'll put my money on this being about the captured one and the talk on him being granted a fair trial. Right? :D
@ C , thanks for the heavy metal album poke ...
@ R , this is about the un captured one .. and putting him under life imprisonment in solitary confinement in one of those dark underground prisons u see in rambo movies
all i can say is.. bitter truth!
ahh the TRUTH ... always what i strive to see
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