tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post5446224762111622339..comments2023-07-08T02:46:11.325-07:00Comments on eternalHalo: Kochi prem( new love)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17025536481262859261noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-87761102385775966682009-05-15T22:35:00.000-07:002009-05-15T22:35:00.000-07:00yes i knowyes i knowAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17025536481262859261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-76299621195220346822009-05-14T10:51:00.000-07:002009-05-14T10:51:00.000-07:00To Anonymous, the line about the cell and the pock...To Anonymous, the line about the cell and the pocket makes the poem "down-to-earth", thus making it all the better. <br />To Diptyajit, The first stanza has more of the "rhyme and rhythm" than the second one.T. Mukherjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17097646879283934280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-75673101788142585622008-07-04T00:47:00.000-07:002008-07-04T00:47:00.000-07:00hey come on charbak ... u r the poet dude .... me ...hey come on charbak ... u r the poet dude .... me am a rookie as far as poems go ... but ur encouragement is always welcome !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17025536481262859261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-36145039039630144262008-07-03T23:46:00.000-07:002008-07-03T23:46:00.000-07:00qt gud..... and i think the lines abt cell is inte...qt gud..... and i think the lines abt cell is interesting... gud that it's not extended further... oderwiz th poem wud lose weight...<BR/><BR/><BR/>keep goin on.... nice job.... ur gud poems as well man..<BR/><BR/>charbakAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-82962299133149600062008-07-03T10:29:00.000-07:002008-07-03T10:29:00.000-07:00suchetna ... i am always in love ! with my work, m...suchetna ... i am always in love ! with my work, my love, my music evrythingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17025536481262859261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-26997445991561534202008-07-03T07:42:00.000-07:002008-07-03T07:42:00.000-07:00gr8 Yaar.....Real feelings when actually we r in l...gr8 Yaar.....Real feelings when actually we r in love...<BR/>r U too???/<BR/><BR/><BR/>keep on writing...<BR/>& yes the poem ws good....try sum more...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18391066804488382035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-48920203940025363242008-07-03T03:38:00.000-07:002008-07-03T03:38:00.000-07:00i like the way u write~ its just true from ur hear...i like the way u write~ its just true from ur heart and really dnt feel anything forcefully stuffed.<BR/>All seems so natural...<BR/>Thats wat i like in a writing..<BR/>keep it up buddy.rimzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01397051720324170082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-59552321168723623412008-07-03T03:27:00.000-07:002008-07-03T03:27:00.000-07:00to anonymous reader : ya i know i shuldnt hav talk...to anonymous reader : ya i know i shuldnt hav talkd of the cell ...it sounds too artificial. and u bet ill keep up the nice work<BR/><BR/>to amrita: ill try to make a better attempt nxt tymAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17025536481262859261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-42971461247703364602008-07-03T01:29:00.001-07:002008-07-03T01:29:00.001-07:00very nice indeed...xcept for the one instance wen ...very nice indeed...xcept for the one instance wen u mention abt cell nd recharge..<BR/>..the very idea of the philosophical mood nd da tranquil feeling...wen everythng is infrnt of u...bt the image on ur mind is only of ur luv....its quite purgatory..nd healing..!<BR/><BR/>cheers...keep up the nice wrk...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-56280072021438708372008-07-03T01:29:00.000-07:002008-07-03T01:29:00.000-07:00good attempt...good attempt...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8013930857979525972.post-34933499694495166922008-07-03T01:17:00.000-07:002008-07-03T01:17:00.000-07:00actuaaly a senior sent me a poem, in bengali. i go...actuaaly a senior sent me a poem, in bengali. i got inspired !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17025536481262859261noreply@blogger.com